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Is this poem, by chance, another rememberance of your mother???

posted by Joe_Love on May 23, 2009 at 12:02 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Always superb and you've nearly used the Québec motto for your title; 'Je Me Souviens..' and I loved your French conclusion quote too luv......

posted by WileyJohn on May 19, 2009 at 7:10 PM | link to this | reply

very lovely

posted by lustorlove on May 19, 2009 at 3:32 PM | link to this | reply

Thankyou for your beautiful poem.

posted by elinjo on May 19, 2009 at 11:31 AM | link to this | reply

Astonishing imagery sweetie! It is just awesome! Love you the mostest! sammie

posted by sam444 on May 19, 2009 at 8:47 AM | link to this | reply

sweet, sensitive and utterly beautiful
in its enduring sadness.  Wonderful poem again, my dear

posted by lionreign on May 19, 2009 at 7:44 AM | link to this | reply

Sweet reminiscing Sinome
beautifully written with some fine imagery; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on May 19, 2009 at 5:17 AM | link to this | reply

Astonishing work of art you have here!  Such a sweet daydream, and a bittersweet bit of nostalgia. 

posted by calia14 on May 18, 2009 at 10:51 PM | link to this | reply

I love the quote at the end.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 18, 2009 at 8:20 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful as usual Sinome

posted by shobana on May 18, 2009 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

Mmmm! you are special!

posted by lestate7 on May 18, 2009 at 6:14 PM | link to this | reply

A very sweet reminiscence...as sweet as the sunset you portray.  It warms the heart even though it is now just a memory, rather than something  tangible to love still.  I love this.

posted by NiteTide on May 18, 2009 at 4:53 PM | link to this | reply

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