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...holds me to his holy breast..
Well done.
Kathy
posted by
Maryka77
on May 19, 2009 at 12:51 PM
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Such a nice poem
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on May 16, 2009 at 12:59 PM
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Well done Squippy!
posted by
merkie
on May 16, 2009 at 12:21 PM
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Re:
I meant patience. sorry for the confusion on that one. I'm not a very good speller.
posted by
squippy
on May 16, 2009 at 11:17 AM
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Beautiful, very beautiful...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 16, 2009 at 10:36 AM
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Beautiful, very beautiful...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 16, 2009 at 10:36 AM
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A beautiful piece on being saved! But I do have one question about your last line. Did you mean "patients" or "patience"? I am asking because the ending is very different to me with the word "patients" than "patience" and I'm not sure if that was the way you wanted it to read.
posted by
NiteTide
on May 16, 2009 at 8:49 AM
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