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Re: Sam444

Thank you!! that was the first image that came to me, and the one which got this poem started (unusual for me to start at the beginning)  I am very glad you enjoyed this - it was a fun one to write

posted by lionreign on May 18, 2009 at 4:34 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Raphael222

Thanks!  I am glad, I see dawn as a moment of love, hope, beauty and opportunity and I am delighted that some of this transfered

posted by lionreign on May 18, 2009 at 4:29 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Merkie

glad you enjoyed this one... I had some fun with it

posted by lionreign on May 18, 2009 at 4:27 AM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

Fantastic! That was exactly what I hoped for - to capture some of my hope and enthusiasm for the new day

posted by lionreign on May 18, 2009 at 4:21 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Dawn

thank you 2Philomena!

posted by lionreign on May 18, 2009 at 4:17 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Lion

thank you Troosha, I am glad you enjoyed it

posted by lionreign on May 18, 2009 at 4:12 AM | link to this | reply

Re: spiderfly

  It is a small world!!  How curious it is too! 

 

Very glad you enjoyed the poem too - thanks for reading

posted by lionreign on May 18, 2009 at 4:10 AM | link to this | reply

Re: hardilaziz

thanks - I tend to feel that the dawn always is

posted by lionreign on May 18, 2009 at 4:07 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Beautiful........truly inspiring

thanks Sue!!!

posted by lionreign on May 18, 2009 at 4:05 AM | link to this | reply

Re: NiteTide

Thanks sweetie!!  Glad you liked this one... I had to be up really early to get the inspiration

posted by lionreign on May 18, 2009 at 4:04 AM | link to this | reply

	The treacled flood of golden light

Now I loved the wording! I imagined it to be as syrup instead of unrestrained such as in a movie plot! The end really accentuated the beginning for me too! sam

posted by sam444 on May 17, 2009 at 7:50 PM | link to this | reply

"The dawn shows me the new day she made
And waits for my excitement to begin..."

I love this personification of dawn! It makes me feel warm inside.

A poem of hope...a new day. Lovely!

 Raphael

 

posted by Raphael222 on May 17, 2009 at 6:14 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent images of treacled dawn and personification! Excitement in the sea of chances inoculates all with anticipation!

posted by merkie on May 16, 2009 at 12:38 PM | link to this | reply

Just great!  Makes me want to join in the fun.

posted by TAPS. on May 16, 2009 at 10:56 AM | link to this | reply

Dawn

A poem of great illumination and hope.

posted by 2Philomena on May 16, 2009 at 10:40 AM | link to this | reply

Lion

What an absolutely excellent way welcome in the dawn!   

posted by Troosha on May 16, 2009 at 7:42 AM | link to this | reply

loved this, read that you are in taunton,  i used to live in minehad, small world

posted by spiderfly on May 16, 2009 at 5:50 AM | link to this | reply

Full of hope and positive energy!

posted by hardilaziz on May 16, 2009 at 5:13 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful........truly inspiring

posted by 9STAR on May 16, 2009 at 4:45 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully and stunningly hopeful!  A dawn of a new day!!!!!!  WONDERFUL!

posted by NiteTide on May 16, 2009 at 4:39 AM | link to this | reply