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...shiny pearls..

I like this poem - very peaceful. Kathy

posted by Maryka77 on May 8, 2009 at 9:30 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful; I would be inspired to write as well! Peace and blessings Mariaki! Shelly

posted by sam444 on May 8, 2009 at 8:17 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful and inspiring poem Maria.

posted by muley12 on May 8, 2009 at 2:12 AM | link to this | reply

mariaki

Very sweet cadence, Maria, and Deepak Chopra's saying is exhorting one to be like the eye of the storm, which is always still

posted by Bhaskar.ing on May 7, 2009 at 7:31 PM | link to this | reply

Oh, I can feel the inspiration and, yes, that's right, this poem reads like a song.

posted by vogue on May 7, 2009 at 3:08 PM | link to this | reply

This poem sings

and dances across the ballroom of my imagination.  Bravo, dear one!

posted by lionreign on May 7, 2009 at 10:45 AM | link to this | reply

This spreads peace like a velvet blanket of inspiration Sigh!

posted by merkie on May 7, 2009 at 9:19 AM | link to this | reply

How Awesome!

I Love It!

posted by Kolekshuns on May 7, 2009 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply

A MAGICAL FLOW ON THIS NIGHT! VERY NICE.

posted by shamasehar on May 7, 2009 at 7:55 AM | link to this | reply

This poem is great!

I felt the music in this poem...the Music of the Night....

More than that, Deepak Chopra, to me, is the greatest man I have ever had the privilege to briefly meet once. I have read his books many times over....so trust me, I know where you are coming from....the still, peaceful center in the midst of the chaos.

Finally: Your lines, "On a night like tonight..." together with your word pictures and repetitions..of your inspiration, I could hear quite clearly the song from Evita sung by the man that takes her to Buenos Aires and seduces her. I think it is a tango.

Your poem is full of light, color and music ---- it makes me want to paint a picture!

(If you haven't seen the movie Evita wth Madonna and Antonio Banderas, do rent it.

It is awesome, gripping...a rock opera at its very best..it leaves you breathless!)

 Just like your poem does!  Brilliant!

Raphael.

posted by Raphael222 on May 7, 2009 at 2:48 AM | link to this | reply