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Wow..Sinome, there you go again painting with your poetry and capturing this feeling brilliantly. Someone to hold, especially in the lonely night.
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 9, 2009 at 9:26 PM
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I felt like I was there...
feeling that craving, that loneliness, that pain... superb as ever, you are a most exceptional poet
posted by
lionreign
on May 6, 2009 at 5:37 AM
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Stunning imagery my dear Sinome
heartfelt words spoken from the heart; beautiful piece my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on May 6, 2009 at 3:39 AM
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Physical love forever, is a dream. A good person will always make anyone happy, minus the sparks, cymbals and thunderbolts! I wish I could explain!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 5, 2009 at 11:40 PM
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A forever love beautifully expressed.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 5, 2009 at 11:02 PM
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Such warmth and tenderness is felt by being with the one that you love late at night. Very well written, I felt your pain.
posted by
calia14
on May 5, 2009 at 10:42 PM
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Marta, Your expressions in poetry are....
heartfelt. You speak of feelings that no doubt others feel but are silent. Too good!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on May 5, 2009 at 8:42 PM
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Highly passionate and profound .......
posted by
afzal50
on May 5, 2009 at 8:08 PM
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No, not wrong to feel these emotions Sinome..beautifully expressed.
posted by
shobana
on May 5, 2009 at 7:43 PM
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Oh Marta, how you make me want to weep sometimes by the pure magnetism of your words. We wouldn't even have to ever experience heartbreak to know every single emotion that strums through your words. You bring emotions to life like magic.
posted by
NiteTide
on May 5, 2009 at 6:23 PM
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just the way I feel
posted by
Lanetay
on May 5, 2009 at 6:13 PM
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Incredibly romantic.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 5, 2009 at 4:42 PM
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sinome
WOW!!!
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on May 5, 2009 at 4:16 PM
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This says so much...beautiful work, Simone.
posted by
Ariala
on May 5, 2009 at 3:21 PM
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When you are all alone, there is an angel to protect you.....if it's not
the right one, rather be alone....much better.....Because people can be alone and live in peace....but living with someone miserable or controlling will never even let you breath....
even though at times we all feel loneliness because of being alone, it's a quiet moment...where wishes will nourish and heal the pain of past....
posted by
Star5_
on May 5, 2009 at 12:23 PM
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till the stars all burn away..... wonderful
Marta, I get a big lump in my throat when I read your beautiful words...they touch me so deeply, it's as if you read my thoughts and that we have the same thing happening to us. You are amazing.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on May 5, 2009 at 11:16 AM
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This is truly a romantic poem. So incredibly lovely, like a sad song.
Skin to skin is a glorious feeling, one that I miss, myself.
posted by
tessmae
on May 5, 2009 at 10:11 AM
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Do you mind if I print this and take it with me to Australia? It will help
me it is so perfect.
posted by
Kabu
on May 5, 2009 at 10:00 AM
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I think there is a longing the whispers always a lonely sigh!
posted by
merkie
on May 5, 2009 at 9:43 AM
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