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A lot going on there.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 4, 2009 at 4:45 PM | link to this | reply

Gorgeous expression of anger and pain

Beautifully written, but I hope your sleep took you closer to Heaven or at least further from Hell

posted by lionreign on May 4, 2009 at 6:30 AM | link to this | reply

Sad and I detect slightly angry attitude here my friend

I hope you were true to your self and slept well Sinome; very well phrased; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on May 4, 2009 at 3:31 AM | link to this | reply

you are so fly it's crazy! I love your style in

every way! 

posted by lestate7 on May 4, 2009 at 1:58 AM | link to this | reply

GOODNIGHT & I WONDER DO YOU THINK OF US

EMOTIONAL AND ELEGANT AS ALWAYS.HAVE ENJOYED YOUR PROSE IMMENSELY.STAY TRUE TO YOUR WRITING.I HAD TO CANCEL FOR A WHILE,BUT HOPE TO BE BACK AFTER A BRIEF STAY IN THE HOSPITAL.GOD BLESS.RAY(SONGS)

 

posted by raywords on May 4, 2009 at 1:38 AM | link to this | reply

Well expressed...and I wish you sweet dreams that will filter into

your reality.

posted by Chilitree on May 3, 2009 at 11:37 PM | link to this | reply

Disturbing thoughts well brought out Sinome. Great Job.

posted by shobana on May 3, 2009 at 10:33 PM | link to this | reply

...and the end leaves us to wonder if the speaker will dream of the one she did not want to think of to begin with.  Again, a wonderful poem, Marta.  This one was heart wrenching this time - but still beautiful.  This is amazing.

posted by NiteTide on May 3, 2009 at 10:10 PM | link to this | reply