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Amazing poem... loved the last two lines ... You have a way with words :-)
posted by
Sinome
on April 20, 2009 at 9:19 PM
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Very sad with cases like that. Beautiful way of expressing it.
posted by
elinjo
on April 19, 2009 at 12:02 PM
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Excellent! Awesome imagery! The close was perfect! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 19, 2009 at 5:59 AM
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Odd that we do not realize these scenes are an alarm!
posted by
merkie
on April 18, 2009 at 11:28 AM
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Beautiful writing! Great stuff!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 18, 2009 at 12:47 AM
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What an odd little story. . .,
about an odd little man.
posted by
Joe_Love
on April 17, 2009 at 8:10 PM
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I like the last three lines- absolutely brilliant!
posted by
hardilaziz
on April 17, 2009 at 8:08 PM
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