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Shadows?
Each season of Winter...is harbinger of Spring.
posted by
Anonim
on April 7, 2009 at 6:43 PM
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In the shadows is never a good place to be my dear Sinome
you have very well portrayed this in your superbly written poem bringing the image alive perfectly as you usualy do my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on April 6, 2009 at 5:30 AM
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amazingly sad but wonderful too.
posted by
Kabu
on April 5, 2009 at 9:08 PM
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while you dwell in that far away land
that exclusively exists in your mind
and its not quite heaven nor is it hell,
a place where you seem to fit quite well.
This is a fantastic poignant imagery, my sweet princess, and my heart goes out to you. I am sure you will be able to, with your unceasing efforts, bring him light and your own heaven, one day. Your desert prince is confident about this.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 5, 2009 at 8:53 PM
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Feels so sad and helpless ,what a battle!
posted by
merkie
on April 5, 2009 at 5:23 PM
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Sinome, so beautifully written. Very touching. xoxoox
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 5, 2009 at 4:08 PM
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I would hate to be in those shadows.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 5, 2009 at 3:48 PM
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