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Shadows?

Each season of Winter...is harbinger of Spring.

posted by Anonim on April 7, 2009 at 6:43 PM | link to this | reply

In the shadows is never a good place to be my dear Sinome

you have very well portrayed this in your superbly written poem bringing the image alive perfectly as you usualy do my friend; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on April 6, 2009 at 5:30 AM | link to this | reply

amazingly sad but wonderful too.

posted by Kabu on April 5, 2009 at 9:08 PM | link to this | reply

while you  dwell in that far away land
that exclusively  exists in your mind
and its not quite  heaven nor is it hell,
 a place where you seem to fit quite well.

This is a fantastic poignant imagery, my sweet princess, and my heart goes out to you. I am sure you will be able to, with your unceasing efforts, bring him light and your own heaven, one day. Your desert prince is confident about this.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on April 5, 2009 at 8:53 PM | link to this | reply

Feels so sad and helpless ,what a battle!

posted by merkie on April 5, 2009 at 5:23 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome, so beautifully written. Very touching. xoxoox

posted by hazel_st_cricket on April 5, 2009 at 4:08 PM | link to this | reply

I would hate to be in those shadows.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 5, 2009 at 3:48 PM | link to this | reply