Comments on Aquatics

Go to Ash Pradhan's Poetry - Add a comment - Go to Aquatics

Like Mariaki

I am amazed at your concise verse, and the effortless grace with which you pack a nuclear punch into it

posted by lionreign on April 3, 2009 at 10:35 AM | link to this | reply

Complacency invariably brings terrible news.

posted by hardilaziz on April 2, 2009 at 6:50 PM | link to this | reply

as always, hard-hitting and oh! so crisp. hats off to you.

posted by bythewindowsill on April 2, 2009 at 8:11 AM | link to this | reply

How you manage to say so much with so little words by dear Ash

always amazes me! Excellent piece as always my friend; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on April 2, 2009 at 5:16 AM | link to this | reply

posted by shobana on April 2, 2009 at 1:14 AM | link to this | reply

_{Iwas the second best swimmer in my village...but I was the brightest! Meaning....it takes brains to pilot through life!}

posted by Soul_Builder101 on April 1, 2009 at 11:19 PM | link to this | reply

AsH....you always got a good topic

posted by 9STAR on April 1, 2009 at 6:57 PM | link to this | reply

ash, one can fall asleep, drifting aimlessly in this complacency

and suddenly find themselves in a heap of troubles....

posted by Rumor on April 1, 2009 at 4:04 PM | link to this | reply

wow great writing.

and thanks for the welcome back :~)

posted by _Symphony_ on April 1, 2009 at 1:50 PM | link to this | reply

Indeed, swimming is better than drowning!

posted by merkie on April 1, 2009 at 12:27 PM | link to this | reply

Profound!

posted by metalrat on April 1, 2009 at 12:25 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent !!

posted by hazel_st_cricket on April 1, 2009 at 12:22 PM | link to this | reply

Ash

The “pool” of complacence is a danger place to swim….

posted by Troosha on April 1, 2009 at 11:54 AM | link to this | reply

Yes, too many complacent people.  They are even worse than those who hate, I think, because they can do something and don't.  Mal

posted by gapcohen on April 1, 2009 at 11:45 AM | link to this | reply

Awesome poem. So many people fit that description.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 1, 2009 at 11:40 AM | link to this | reply

Notice how the animals sense a tsunami before us humans do :)? - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on April 1, 2009 at 11:29 AM | link to this | reply