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Pow! What an ending!

posted by MomentsinTime on May 11, 2009 at 9:43 PM | link to this | reply

Eight year olds or eighty year olds need to be told they look lovely! Men!

posted by elinjo on May 5, 2009 at 9:20 AM | link to this | reply

The day after my eighth birthday
Excellent stuff! The ending really did make me laugh.

posted by 2Philomena on April 2, 2009 at 9:38 AM | link to this | reply

wow..

posted by Star5_ on April 1, 2009 at 8:21 PM | link to this | reply

F U Dad
 This was a really great story and I'm not sure if it was suppose to or not, but the ending made me laugh. I guess this is what dads get for being douche bags.

posted by mimajo on April 1, 2009 at 6:04 PM | link to this | reply

WOW!!!
That's mind blowing

posted by Storm1973 on April 1, 2009 at 3:43 PM | link to this | reply

I love it! I think pig tails are so cute! My daughter wore them for years! Delightful story! Picture day is very important to little girls! sam

posted by sam444 on April 1, 2009 at 4:19 AM | link to this | reply