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That's what I wonder, Maryka77.

Thanks for reading this.

posted by SpitFire70 on April 25, 2009 at 5:36 PM | link to this | reply

...A part of her not whole...

Very nice.

posted by Maryka77 on April 25, 2009 at 4:13 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks, StraightF,

I hope it didn't upset you, though. My mom (adoptive mom) died 2 years ago. I miss her terribly and she will always be my only mother. This was written for my birth mother. Thank you for reading it. 

posted by SpitFire70 on April 6, 2009 at 12:31 PM | link to this | reply

This is touching and it just made me remember my mum who is no more

posted by Straightforward on April 6, 2009 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks so much for those kind words, yellowrose!

posted by SpitFire70 on April 4, 2009 at 12:30 PM | link to this | reply

Such deeply moving thoughts are pouring out in your poem, so beautifully written. From the heart.....Experiencing this must be heartbreaking.

posted by yellowrose55 on April 4, 2009 at 12:19 PM | link to this | reply

That's so sweet of you to say, mariposa75

Thank you!

posted by SpitFire70 on April 2, 2009 at 11:56 PM | link to this | reply

I'm sure she does.  A mother can never forget a child born to them.

posted by mariposa75 on April 2, 2009 at 3:52 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks, Sam. Yeah, I think

becoming a mom helps me understand a bit better. It's still hard not to wonder about her.

posted by SpitFire70 on April 2, 2009 at 12:51 PM | link to this | reply

Happy belated birthday! You are a Mom and I know you know the answer even though you wonder! There is an eternal bond in my humble opinion! There is for me! sam VEry well written too!

posted by sam444 on April 2, 2009 at 11:55 AM | link to this | reply

I hope so, hardilaziz. Thank you very much!

posted by SpitFire70 on April 2, 2009 at 10:53 AM | link to this | reply

Re: also - Happy birthday xx

Thank you, Symph!!

posted by SpitFire70 on April 2, 2009 at 10:53 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks for that, merkie

posted by SpitFire70 on April 2, 2009 at 10:52 AM | link to this | reply

There's no doubt she feels for you as much as you do for her!

posted by hardilaziz on April 1, 2009 at 9:24 PM | link to this | reply

also - Happy birthday xx

posted by _Symphony_ on April 1, 2009 at 1:38 PM | link to this | reply

wonderfully written.....

posted by _Symphony_ on April 1, 2009 at 1:37 PM | link to this | reply

As a mom I don't think you could forget ,no matter what!

posted by merkie on April 1, 2009 at 12:50 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Timmy!

posted by SpitFire70 on April 1, 2009 at 11:12 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Teddy.

And I understand what you're saying. It is still hard not to wonder. I always wonder about it the most on my birthday, though.

posted by SpitFire70 on April 1, 2009 at 11:12 AM | link to this | reply

spiffy

Wow....this is very very good!!

posted by TIMMYTALES on April 1, 2009 at 11:11 AM | link to this | reply

Deep inside I think you know the answer, Dear 'fire...

 Stunning illustration of Heart, my friend!

posted by _teddypoet_ on April 1, 2009 at 11:10 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Kayzzaman!

posted by SpitFire70 on April 1, 2009 at 10:56 AM | link to this | reply

Very well done...

posted by Kayzzaman on April 1, 2009 at 2:28 AM | link to this | reply