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You see Calia14, this poem has something I love so much in the art of poetry writing-that is RHYME. Not only is the poem interesting, the rhyme and rhythmic flow adds a whole lot of flavor to it. You Rock! Rock on!

posted by intellectual_acumen on March 30, 2009 at 12:22 AM | link to this | reply

hope you had a good sleep

posted by shobana on March 29, 2009 at 8:12 PM | link to this | reply

Cute Poem

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 28, 2009 at 3:28 PM | link to this | reply

Very cool sleepytime poem too! sam

posted by sam444 on March 28, 2009 at 12:39 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice and refreshing

posted by chuck_ibrahim on March 28, 2009 at 9:34 AM | link to this | reply

Very cute and sweet :-)  WOnderful!

posted by Sinome on March 28, 2009 at 7:59 AM | link to this | reply

This is fun!

posted by Rockingrector_retd on March 28, 2009 at 3:50 AM | link to this | reply

love your words lauren

posted by spiderfly on March 28, 2009 at 2:22 AM | link to this | reply

lol...

very nice and "cheepy", calia.  lovely.

posted by GingerTyme on March 28, 2009 at 1:00 AM | link to this | reply

Re: very sweet, lullabye like...

Huh, didn't really think of it like that, thanks!

posted by calia14 on March 27, 2009 at 11:32 PM | link to this | reply

very sweet, lullabye like...

posted by hazel_st_cricket on March 27, 2009 at 11:22 PM | link to this | reply