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posted by strat on March 27, 2009 at 6:23 AM | link to this | reply

One should wake from that sleep well rested and refreshed. 

posted by TAPS. on March 26, 2009 at 2:31 PM | link to this | reply

 Beautifully orchestrated childhood fantasy turns the adult dream of happiness love. bca, bill*s roost

posted by BC-A on March 26, 2009 at 10:30 AM | link to this | reply

This is wonderful...great descriptions and imagery!

posted by Ariala on March 26, 2009 at 5:53 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful imagery! I just drifted through this poem, such a pleasant experience! sam

posted by sam444 on March 26, 2009 at 4:16 AM | link to this | reply

Great poetry!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 25, 2009 at 10:17 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Good Evening!
 & vm...

posted by _teddypoet_ on March 25, 2009 at 9:45 PM | link to this | reply

Good Evening!

posted by PoetRaye on March 25, 2009 at 9:39 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank YOU deeply, Dearest One!!
Most welcome, Number One...

posted by _teddypoet_ on March 25, 2009 at 9:36 PM | link to this | reply

Most appreciated, Merkie!

posted by PoetRaye on March 25, 2009 at 9:32 PM | link to this | reply

Thank YOU deeply, Dearest One!!

posted by PoetRaye on March 25, 2009 at 9:31 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful  Awesome rays of springshine!

posted by merkie on March 25, 2009 at 12:34 PM | link to this | reply

 

posted by _teddypoet_ on March 25, 2009 at 11:23 AM | link to this | reply

Outstanding, Number One!

posted by _teddypoet_ on March 25, 2009 at 10:33 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you so much, Drohan!
 

posted by PoetRaye on March 25, 2009 at 7:42 AM | link to this | reply

spring thirst ..a beautiful poem water our thirsty souls RAYE

posted by drohan254 on March 25, 2009 at 7:41 AM | link to this | reply

Hello, Troosha..Thank you so much!
 

posted by PoetRaye on March 25, 2009 at 7:31 AM | link to this | reply

Raye

What a poem!  What a closing line!!!  

posted by Troosha on March 25, 2009 at 7:30 AM | link to this | reply

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