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Very evocative and beautiful. God bless. Nita.

posted by snowview on March 26, 2009 at 3:36 AM | link to this | reply

so very romantic, its nice to have memories

posted by lustorlove on March 25, 2009 at 9:25 PM | link to this | reply

This was such a wonderful poem in reminiscences. Rememeber, remember ... came out so powerfully, and then I know you don't remember, came so poignantly. flooding with memories of how we made love all through the night, until sunlight fell on our bed. Very well done, my princess Marta xoxoxo

posted by Bhaskar.ing on March 25, 2009 at 9:06 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Beautiful! Your love lives, as do the memories - and that is all we have in the end, love and memories, and memories of love...

posted by Nautikos on March 25, 2009 at 7:03 PM | link to this | reply

This is incredulous imagery! How very romantic and heart wrenching at the same time! I love it when one loverscarries another when times are tough! Love you so Sinome! I love Paris! Great artists have been there and passed through there too! Fabulous poem! sammy xoxoxoxoo

posted by sam444 on March 25, 2009 at 6:53 PM | link to this | reply

very beautiful.

posted by hazel_st_cricket on March 25, 2009 at 5:15 PM | link to this | reply

I've always been intrigued by people who still remember while the other opts to forget.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 25, 2009 at 5:10 PM | link to this | reply

I am in accordance with Lionreign! Springtime memory!

posted by merkie on March 25, 2009 at 12:47 PM | link to this | reply

Paris can do that to a person, but so can Kansas City.  When a person is ripe for love, dingy turns to sparkly and clouds have silver linings and ever after one remembers the love and feels the pain of love lost.  I remember the Paris of your Poem.

posted by TAPS. on March 25, 2009 at 10:46 AM | link to this | reply

My dear, you have a gift

for reaching to touch the souls of your readers, your poem has such beautiful sincerity that it cannot help but stir emotion.  I love this

posted by lionreign on March 25, 2009 at 9:45 AM | link to this | reply

Every affirmation of your love is fresh and lively!

posted by hardilaziz on March 25, 2009 at 8:24 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Perhaps he does remember and if not the memory is held in your heart for the two of you – and what a memory it is!  

posted by Troosha on March 25, 2009 at 6:44 AM | link to this | reply

Poignantly reminiscent...

...and reminiscently poignant. Touching and beautiful both ways.

posted by metalrat on March 25, 2009 at 6:02 AM | link to this | reply

poetryon and on

posted by lestate7 on March 25, 2009 at 2:50 AM | link to this | reply

that is a very beautiful from her to him  ...how sad and how wonderful that she remember what he forgot ,..to think alone as they think together ..excellent poem ...sinome

posted by drohan254 on March 25, 2009 at 2:28 AM | link to this | reply

Aw!

This was so sad!Great writing!

posted by calia14 on March 25, 2009 at 12:05 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

I do remember being in Paris holding hands but it couldn't have been you, but your writing is so good it makes me think it was you luv.

posted by WileyJohn on March 24, 2009 at 9:31 PM | link to this | reply