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so sad, yet so lovely.
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Ariala
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March 18, 2009
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Beautiful beyond words
*stands and applauds*
posted by
lionreign
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March 18, 2009
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Lovely poem
as lovely as a kiss by the sea.
Carl Peter
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cpklapper
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March 18, 2009
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ahhh so very well expressed.......heartfelt.
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_Symphony_
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March 18, 2009
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Utterly fantastic my dear Sinome
the image is so vivid and emotions overflow onto the page; a stupendous write my friend although sad it is still one of life's realities and you have depicted it so well; very well done indeed; many blessings and thanks
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mariaki
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March 18, 2009
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Wow! This is an outstanding poem! I am speechless! Poignant imagery! sammy
xoxoxo
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sam444
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March 18, 2009
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Seldom can the happiness of the past be regained once it is lost, other than in memories
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TAPS.
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March 17, 2009
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Very deeply felt...
I am back again, Marta.
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Kayzzaman
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March 17, 2009
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Very deeply felt...
I am back again, Marta.
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Kayzzaman
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March 17, 2009
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Very deeply felt...
I am back again, Marta.
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Kayzzaman
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March 17, 2009
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Yes, a very beautiful and poignant poem and this line I think is one of the most poignant:
'for loving the right man, at the wrong moment'
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elinjo
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March 17, 2009
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Very beautiful and poignant. God bless. Nita.
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snowview
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March 17, 2009
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Fragile hearts break easy.....as do the seas waves breaking on the shore.
Nice one....
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yellowrose55
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March 17, 2009
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Poignant indeed! from a heart pouring with Love, and the yearning for her beloved being near who could comfort and who she could comfort. You are a beautiful one my princess Marta xoxoxo
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Bhaskar.ing
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March 17, 2009
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Poignant wishes Marta... tugging the heart strings..
posted by
merkie
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March 17, 2009
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Sinome
'If you were here' we could tell you how wonderful a poet and writer you are and we just love you
posted by
WileyJohn
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March 17, 2009
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Beautiful! Well done, Sinome.
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myrrhage
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March 17, 2009
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This was so sad you brought the tears to my eyes and I had to pop
across the room and hug my Wiley.
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Kabu
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March 17, 2009
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so much real love
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lustorlove
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March 17, 2009
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Your love is genuine and it shows always!
posted by
hardilaziz
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March 17, 2009
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Very touching and poignant.
posted by
metalrat
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March 17, 2009
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WOW, Sinome. This is my favorite of yours, thus far, and I love them all.
Really deep and touching. Beautiful.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
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March 17, 2009
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oh now I am going to cry...
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OTA.
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March 17, 2009
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"loneliness is a harsh punishment for loving the right man at the wrong
moment"....Ioften wonder what would have happened if a teenage sweetheart (before Liz came along) had not been swept away from me by someone close to being my best friend at the time....I still wonder, and I guess I always will...
...
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Rumor
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March 17, 2009
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Happy St. Patrick's Day.
I cannot imagine what it is like when a significant other is not there anymore.
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FormerStudentIntern
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March 17, 2009
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