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intresting poem and dream ..well said Raye

posted by drohan254 on March 20, 2009 at 3:23 AM | link to this | reply

OOuuuhhhh I really enjoyed this poem.  It pulses with untamed rage.  And I can't help but notice the rug parallel, though mine was much less intense!  Well done. 

posted by myrrhage on March 19, 2009 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you kindly, Rockingrector!

posted by PoetRaye on March 18, 2009 at 11:44 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you so much, Dear Justi!

  The weird majik (?) or other-sensory elements of the dream/nightmare kinda freaked me out..I think it was a message of 'simply because the power is there, doesn't mean you should embody it'..

posted by PoetRaye on March 18, 2009 at 11:37 AM | link to this | reply

Wow! this is powerful - I can feel the pain and the need to smash something, yet tempered by the greater need to preserve just some small thing that is lovely.

posted by Rockingrector_retd on March 18, 2009 at 10:11 AM | link to this | reply

PoetRaye

Oh my my this is awesome. Every pulse of pain, sorrow, loss and unfulfilled promise is dancing in this scene. This is powerful, great needs to be published. Oh it is great!

posted by Justi on March 17, 2009 at 7:21 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you kindly, Sam..

posted by PoetRaye on March 17, 2009 at 6:57 AM | link to this | reply

Thank You deeply, Dearest Ted..

posted by PoetRaye on March 17, 2009 at 6:57 AM | link to this | reply

Awesome imagery! Very engrossing too! sam

posted by sam444 on March 16, 2009 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

Entertaining indeed...nice work!

posted by _teddypoet_ on March 16, 2009 at 4:13 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Shanna

Based on a crazy dream..:)..

posted by PoetRaye on March 16, 2009 at 12:56 PM | link to this | reply

Loved the way it flowed and the imagery. Way to vent!!

posted by shanna63437 on March 16, 2009 at 12:53 PM | link to this | reply