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Superb imagery Sinome my dear

albeit with a melancholy tone it is still such a beautiful piece; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on March 9, 2009 at 5:55 AM | link to this | reply

Superb imagery my dear Sinome! It is sad but wow it is laden with gorgeous imagery! sammy xoxoxoxo

posted by sam444 on March 9, 2009 at 4:19 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and painful

This is heart wrenching and tragic, but it drips with such astounding imagery!

posted by calia14 on March 9, 2009 at 1:29 AM | link to this | reply

 In contrast to the usual melancholy of night I felt brightened by the light after six of daylight savings time tonight at work. However it puzzled me about the passing of time and if the daylight would end. But darkness and light affect mood. You capture your mood well. BCA, Bill*s Cae

posted by BC-A on March 9, 2009 at 12:10 AM | link to this | reply

very sad and heart breaking. your writings always take us with you in a journey

posted by chuck_ibrahim on March 8, 2009 at 10:43 PM | link to this | reply

I have just put the Destiny back on my blog. Sorry again, it was such a sweet email from my princess that warmed up my heart.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on March 8, 2009 at 10:14 PM | link to this | reply

What imagery, princess Marta! and no hues of mauve and amethyst will color his parting sky. All the love from your admiring prince xoxo:-)

posted by Bhaskar.ing on March 8, 2009 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

Sorrowful song you are humming to us today my dear Marta. Very heart wrenching tinged with grey!

posted by merkie on March 8, 2009 at 9:08 PM | link to this | reply

Very melancholic and heart breaking. Cheers for a brighter morrow.

posted by hardilaziz on March 8, 2009 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

so sad...always so sad, I'd love for the stars to shine for you again.

posted by hazel_st_cricket on March 8, 2009 at 8:30 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

That was a heart breaker if ever I read one, so skillfully written of course. Blessings luv

posted by WileyJohn on March 8, 2009 at 7:05 PM | link to this | reply

sinome......you are a great poet.....you can express any feelings....

posted by 9STAR on March 8, 2009 at 6:32 PM | link to this | reply

When the heart is broken......You nailed it Sinome...you always do. So Sad, but beautiful poetry.

posted by yellowrose55 on March 8, 2009 at 6:29 PM | link to this | reply