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Deep with meaning- for many the story of life!
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merkie
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March 8, 2009
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Profound and beautiful.
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hardilaziz
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March 8, 2009
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Quite profound.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
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March 8, 2009
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your poem is an excellent metaphor of life.
we all run until we flow into the sea.
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muley12
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March 8, 2009
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a beautiful journey i traveled through your words to that sea
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drohan254
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March 8, 2009
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Rivers always flow downhill, yet meet the ocean eventually..great work!-Ash
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ash_pradhan
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March 8, 2009
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whatever will be will be
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lustorlove
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March 8, 2009
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rivers all have a life of their own, and a destination they can't alter...
Up north we've seen small rivers rush like mad hatters into Georgian Bay and here, we see the Detroit River just kind of wind along every day as it acts as a link between the Great Lakes...well said as always..
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Rumor
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March 8, 2009
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Rivers eventually take rocks, trees and flowers to the sea. That is the fate of the 1/3 of terra firma we call land!
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Soul_Builder101
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March 8, 2009
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This is a great picture....one can feel the power of the river! Thanks for commenting on my post. God bless. Nita.
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snowview
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March 8, 2009
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wow...
beautifully written.
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_Symphony_
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March 8, 2009
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I think this is marvelous because I could see the canyons the mighty waters have carved as they head to the sea! Hey sweetie! I am doing okay finally! I hope you are feeling well too! sammy
xoxoxo
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sam444
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March 8, 2009
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I can only dream to be as Good as you! Poetry!
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lestate7
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March 8, 2009
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I am drawn to rivers. There is something special in their flowing. Each seems to have its own character--some lazy, some hyperactive, some gentle, some fierce. But, they are all wet, at one time or another.
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TAPS.
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March 7, 2009
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What a journey of river to the sea of its seeking, and you took us through this wonderful winding path so deftly ... huge xoxo to my princess
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Bhaskar.ing
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March 7, 2009
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Wow, sinome
That was really good. I'm blown away, amazing work, wonderful imagery!
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calia14
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March 7, 2009
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Yes...when all is said and done will there be understanding? Beauty in every line.
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yellowrose55
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March 7, 2009
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River is my sweet memory.......End is my heart beat.......here I am
listenin and reading you.......
posted by
9STAR
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March 7, 2009
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Beautiful, Sinome...I have been working on poem about a river, also.
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hazel_st_cricket
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March 7, 2009
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