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Shadow Caged: Transmission
I think I've found a kindred spirit here! I love writing macabre poems and stories.
posted by
2Philomena
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March 11, 2009
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Excellent, and some words, differently spelt, assume new meanings with another flavor.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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March 10, 2009
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it is beautiful luz ..i enjoyed it 
posted by
drohan254
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March 8, 2009
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4:39 PM
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rage is like a disease, very true...like rabies because it can so easily be
spread...like a plague.....
(Luz, I'm hoping to get "The Dead Live There" moving this week as I'm off til next Fri. Its been a slow star, but hopefully will get better)
posted by
Rumor
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March 6, 2009
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I love this poem! I was touched on all senses! So exquisite! KUDOS! sam
posted by
sam444
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March 5, 2009
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3:23 PM
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Very interesting!
In suctioning, blood sunsets...brilliant!
I think you invented a couple new words...better copyright 'em! lol
posted by
metalrat
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March 5, 2009
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Some flashes of genius here!
great poem on the whole, but I loved the image of rage being transmitted like a disease - so true
posted by
lionreign
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March 5, 2009
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Excellent!
posted by
_teddypoet_
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March 4, 2009
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It was!
posted by
TAPS.
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March 4, 2009
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7:37 PM
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Enjoyable AND interesting! Good one!
posted by
scotcanada
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March 4, 2009
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7:22 PM
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