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Awesome re-creation! The rhyme was fantastic and the cadence in this segment! You are mighty talented my friend! sam
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sam444
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March 3, 2009
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Fantastic verse! How sad they didn't go and leave the fantasms behind.
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mariss9
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March 3, 2009
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This is very real! There are many ghosts around!
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Soul_Builder101
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March 2, 2009
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this is too spooky for me
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lustorlove
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March 2, 2009
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I must say. That is quite a piece of work. Poetry in a tragedy. Quite a tale to tell. Kept us up to read aloud to the very scarey end. Well done.
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Scotcanada
I have been remiss in reading you luv, and now I shall have to go back and read the beginnings of this marvelous and very poetic story.You are one talented lady.......
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WileyJohn
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March 2, 2009
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Nice rhythm.
Good story. Enjoyed reading this and others before it!
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Retail_Realist
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March 2, 2009
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my eyes are wide with anticipation waitng fro the next one. ooooo!
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merkie
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March 2, 2009
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