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On so many levels...

this is like comfort food. That peice of sweet but not too sweet you look for after dinner.

posted by LaMerci on August 21, 2009 at 4:33 AM | link to this | reply

There's no nylon on my face. You write very well, my friend...

posted by hardilaziz on March 7, 2009 at 3:19 AM | link to this | reply

Great as ever...

posted by _teddypoet_ on March 6, 2009 at 11:12 PM | link to this | reply

Re: vogue

Hi vogue, thanks so much for reading.  I like that line, too.  Every now and then I get a good one. :)  Glad you like it also.

posted by Temple on March 6, 2009 at 11:10 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444

Hi Sam!  I always love feedback on imagery and specific lines.  Thanks so much. :)  Nice to see you.

posted by Temple on March 6, 2009 at 11:09 PM | link to this | reply

I'm with sam. I loved the 'not fluent in your language'. Great imagery.

posted by vogue on March 1, 2009 at 8:47 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful and I adore the affirmation! This line resonated with me: I am not fluent in your language Love it! sam

posted by sam444 on March 1, 2009 at 8:39 AM | link to this | reply

Re: RASSE

I love the metaphors and sneaky/hidden meaning.  I can say what I want and people still can make it theirs.  I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for re-reading!  Nice to meet you also, I don't think I've seen you here before ... but I've been sort of AWOL.

posted by Temple on March 1, 2009 at 7:06 AM | link to this | reply

Re: beautiful....how are you Temple??????

Well, it's complicated how I am.  lol ... I posted in Flipping the Gidget, that sums it up.  Thanks for the read and I'm glad you liked it. :)

posted by Temple on March 1, 2009 at 7:04 AM | link to this | reply

This holds a lot of meaning.  I had to read it through twice and am now going back for a third time.  Wonderful.

posted by RASSE on March 1, 2009 at 6:54 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful....how are you Temple??????

posted by 9STAR on March 1, 2009 at 6:45 AM | link to this | reply