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Excellent Style SJ

posted by Star5_ on March 15, 2009 at 7:05 PM | link to this | reply

Good start.
I love a good vampire story! Vampire stories are tricky to write because there is a very thin line between amazing and cheesey. I am not a strong enough writer to pull it off, but I think you are, this begining is really great. I can't wait for the next part.

posted by mimajo on March 1, 2009 at 8:50 AM | link to this | reply

I am hooked and ready for more! sam

posted by sam444 on March 1, 2009 at 4:26 AM | link to this | reply