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Amaze and mind deepen read aswome wording lines of heartfelt season, great!
Can I share a post TIME WILL TELL page 3 poem 1 i'll continue to read. Thank You.

posted by Mystereo on March 7, 2009 at 6:18 AM | link to this | reply

Hello, Dear Ted..
Your verse is exquisite..Thank you.....going now to

posted by PoetRaye on March 5, 2009 at 8:17 AM | link to this | reply

posted by _teddypoet_ on March 5, 2009 at 8:14 AM | link to this | reply

she never wore make-up
over such beauty
as was her face shining from within
she held the starlight so deeply
deep
behind her darling eyes
she was a beauty on a beach
somewhere in the midwest
and I have to wonder
if she had been Dreaming
of a writing soldier
displaced from his sidewalks
of Indiana

posted by _teddypoet_ on February 28, 2009 at 11:13 PM | link to this | reply

Looking forward to the continuation!!!

posted by Straightforward on February 28, 2009 at 11:05 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you so much, Sam..
 

posted by PoetRaye on February 27, 2009 at 6:37 PM | link to this | reply

Awesome comment, Drohan! Thank you..
 

posted by PoetRaye on February 27, 2009 at 6:37 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you kindly, TwilightMerge..
Cool nickname..:)..

posted by PoetRaye on February 27, 2009 at 6:36 PM | link to this | reply

I like the start to this one Raye! sam

posted by sam444 on February 27, 2009 at 2:04 PM | link to this | reply

I loved always indiana ..the down and the stairs ..your words and what between ..wonderful feelings and words Raye filled by the warmth of the down

posted by drohan254 on February 27, 2009 at 12:01 PM | link to this | reply

Some wounds don't heal...a grasper!

posted by MirrorEdge on February 27, 2009 at 11:11 AM | link to this | reply

I was wondering..:)
 

posted by PoetRaye on February 27, 2009 at 7:48 AM | link to this | reply

posted by _teddypoet_ on February 27, 2009 at 7:45 AM | link to this | reply

Good Morning, Dear One..
Thank you for the inspiration..

posted by PoetRaye on February 27, 2009 at 7:26 AM | link to this | reply

Good Morning, Number One...very well done indeed!

posted by _teddypoet_ on February 27, 2009 at 7:23 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you, Ariala!

posted by PoetRaye on February 27, 2009 at 7:20 AM | link to this | reply

oooh, very nice!

posted by Ariala on February 27, 2009 at 6:51 AM | link to this | reply

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