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The spider poem

This is really a great piece of work.  Keeps the reader moving through at a steady beat.  Draws to a conclusion with leaves them till dead.

Excellent

posted by michaudblaine on February 17, 2009 at 9:52 PM | link to this | reply

an interesting insight into why on earth a spider should cry.  A web can be beautiful when dew encrusted.  Hesitate, wriggle,  and the web will catch and wrap you and as you say , leave you for dead.  good writing.............

posted by spiderfly on February 17, 2009 at 2:29 PM | link to this | reply