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Beautiful!

posted by Chilitree on February 16, 2009 at 9:01 PM | link to this | reply

A beautiful simile at the end that got nailed with cupid's arrow of sadness! But exquisite imagery nonetheless, similar to bestest! Might not be a word! lol I am going to stay with Blogit as long as I can! Things are very difficult now and I actually just take life one at a time! It is a most precarious circumstance! I complained about the volume of medication and the number of doctors prescribing and it fell on deaf ears! Now I pay the consequences! Alas, another character building opportunity! I am laughing, that is too much philosophy, not the bestest! May not be a word! lol again! Sammy loves you dearly! xoxoxoxo Did you see my tribute poem and list of bloggers, I have mentioned you there!

posted by sam444 on February 15, 2009 at 3:33 PM | link to this | reply

I wish to thank you for your comment. You have taken a lot of trouble and I truly appreciate that. I needed to get a perspective, because I was really not sure what to think. All the comments have been very helpful. No, I haven't been to the boat show. Since this morning, I have lumbago again, I can hardly move and am in a lot of pain. And that 5 days before I have to fly for 14 hours. Just my luck. I hope it will be better in a few days.

posted by vogue on February 15, 2009 at 2:27 PM | link to this | reply

A BEAUTIFUL AND TOUCHING POEM SINOME ..

 I know that your words of gold and your silver thoughts
though very loved,  will always be   
like those eyes I adore ,  too far from me

posted by drohan254 on February 15, 2009 at 1:40 PM | link to this | reply

Your dreams appear so real and universal.

posted by hardilaziz on February 15, 2009 at 9:42 AM | link to this | reply

So pure and touching words ...

posted by afzal50 on February 15, 2009 at 9:39 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Heartache and inner joy all wrapped up together….

posted by Troosha on February 15, 2009 at 8:08 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome, have you ever thought of trying to get in the greeting card business with your poems.  I can just picture yours selling like hotcakes. 

posted by TAPS. on February 15, 2009 at 1:14 AM | link to this | reply

posted by CRShelley on February 14, 2009 at 10:52 PM | link to this | reply

very romantic

posted by lustorlove on February 14, 2009 at 7:47 PM | link to this | reply

Happy Valentines to my favorite sinome!!!!!!!!

posted by 9STAR on February 14, 2009 at 7:34 PM | link to this | reply

You seem to portray what Indians call DIWAANA...love-craziness! It is, by the way, not the real thing!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on February 14, 2009 at 6:53 PM | link to this | reply

happy valentine S your poetry as always amazing! Less

posted by lestate7 on February 14, 2009 at 5:00 PM | link to this | reply

Such heartache.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 14, 2009 at 4:59 PM | link to this | reply