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Stunning illustration, my friend!
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_teddypoet_
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February 14, 2009
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Thank you all!
I promise to be catching up on my reading soon!
Been a little crazy here at home..Rain is wrecking havoc on things here.....Much thanks to all!
posted by
Wigopa_
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February 11, 2009
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Beautiful poetry! Every word participated in creating the eventful atmosphere of expectancy and realization!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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February 11, 2009
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very picturesque and very romantic, Marion....
a very smart and thoughtful moon indeed to covers its eyes..
..:)
posted by
Rumor
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February 11, 2009
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I just had to catch up on your magnificent work.
your words paint pictures in my mind.
posted by
muley12
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February 11, 2009
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that was avery smart moon ..very romantic images ..like them all wiccan
posted by
drohan254
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February 11, 2009
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Loved it!
posted by
ash_pradhan
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February 11, 2009
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Wiccan
Oozing with romance… Excellent!
posted by
Troosha
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February 11, 2009
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And that is exactly how it feels isn't it my friend
a kind of love so rare where nothing else exists except for this moment; kudos for the most wonderful fairy tale! Many blessings and thanks
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mariaki
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February 11, 2009
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Lovely Marion... A very sweet poem about the magic of love... Bravo my friend!!!!
posted by
Sinome
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February 10, 2009
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Lovely ending With the only awareness the two lovers. Delightful
posted by
merkie
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February 10, 2009
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Lovely and descriptive imagery!
I adore these kind of poetic tales and you are good at them!
They take one away to another place and time and remind me in some ways of "The Other Boleyn Girl'...I was so enchanted by that book, I wrote a poem many moons ago about it, lol..
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PoetRaye
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February 10, 2009
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this is becoming the Romance of the year.
posted by
Kabu
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February 10, 2009
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Kudos!!!!
Exciting & Vividly you brought this dance to a crescendo. Very well done!
posted by
Texas_Gem
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February 10, 2009
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wow.........
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9STAR
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February 10, 2009
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