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This is just wonderful Shelly
I am always amazed at nature's way; excellent piece my friend; many blessings and thanks always
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mariaki
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February 9, 2009
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What brilliant colors Sam! The dawn does soothe the weary soul, and holds great promise. I was missing your comments, and was so glad to see them on my last post. However, I'm really sorry to hear of the headaches--suffered them for years, till I found the cure in ayurveda (the Indian traditional medicine) so I know what you've been through. I do hope you're feeling better. Take it easy now! God bless. Nita.
posted by
snowview
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February 9, 2009
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what a great poem to start my day with. well done sam!
posted by
muley12
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February 9, 2009
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"shadowy ambivalence of the present" I like that line. I don't really even understand what it means but I like the sound.
posted by
Dyl_Pickle
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February 8, 2009
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Shelly
I love sunny mornings...
posted by
Nautikos
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February 8, 2009
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Strength dawns...lovely concept! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
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February 8, 2009
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my mom always would say red sky in the morning sailors take warning, red sky at night sailors delight
posted by
lustorlove
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February 8, 2009
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The last four lines of your poem stay with me....the "Strength" comes as a wonderful blessing. I'm always fascinated by your writing.
posted by
yellowrose55
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February 8, 2009
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the sky opens to connect spirit with heaven
every cloud has a silver lining to bring us strength from above.
posted by
skye08
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February 8, 2009
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Profound illustration, Shelly!
posted by
_teddypoet_
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February 8, 2009
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Amen A fresh day dawns!Bravo Shelly/sam
posted by
merkie
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February 8, 2009
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A "weary" well traveled soul...an even better line...
...but, as you suggest, past disappointments don't have to ruin our future prospects.
posted by
metalrat
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February 8, 2009
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Beautiful. Strength, much coveted by all. Mine comes in spurts these days, then I have to go take a nap. LOL
posted by
TAPS.
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February 8, 2009
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I can picture it perfectly from your words.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
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February 8, 2009
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The dawn beckons one and all. Charming poem this.
posted by
hardilaziz
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February 8, 2009
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I love it, sam...a well travelled soul....great line
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
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February 8, 2009
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