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This is a very easy poem to follow. I could see the old couple on their porch as though I were watching a film. The thread and the silk being thrown in later was at the perfect time to strengthen their shared sense of connection given by them sitting together and holding hands. Lovely!
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Tiddlypush
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February 15, 2009
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This is such a delightful poem. It is so inspirational for Gen Y. As for the lyrical quality, it is superb!
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hardilaziz
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February 7, 2009
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Wow Marta you have such a unique way of setting the emotional scene and the visual images into a moving write.Again Bravo!
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merkie
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February 6, 2009
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love has no age limits and these two show that
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lustorlove
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February 6, 2009
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etched
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Bhaskar.ing
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February 6, 2009
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Such a lovely poetic picture, one that'll be ethed in a readers' memory for a long time. Excellent, my princess xoxoxo
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Bhaskar.ing
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February 6, 2009
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I am right there with you wishing...I could all most see them there...
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Wigopa_
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February 6, 2009
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