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Such a wonderful Mom you are. The love for your Son shows in this poetry of wonder, spilling out into the stars.
I'm glad I didn't miss this one.
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yellowrose55
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February 12, 2009
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He is a brave chap
Just like you made him
posted by
Azur
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February 8, 2009
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I like the bubbles and the transpoition of confidence
posted by
merkie
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February 7, 2009
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Wish your son all the best.
posted by
hardilaziz
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February 7, 2009
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The feelings of alienation and floating in a bubble in space succumb to the knowledge that you will see your son again. You must feel proud for sure love. BCA, Bill*s Ca
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BC-A
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February 7, 2009
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Oh, you must really feel on tenterhooks about him; I can well understand, why you would prefer to picture him sitting in front of a desk. You must also feel very proud of him. Wonderfully expressive poem. Here's wishing you a peaceful and pleasant day.
posted by
elinjo
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February 7, 2009
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I am with Naut... but I don't envy him a little, I envy him a lot... :-) Imagine being there ... floating above the ocean and below the sky... it must be such a liberating experience... but I can imagine also how you worry my friend and the conflicting emotions of pride and fear hitting your heart from all sides. You say it all in this wonderful poem Sammy. Bravo! xoxo
posted by
Sinome
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February 6, 2009
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Shelly
Fascinating poem! And all the best and good luck to Mik. Actually, I envy him a bit...
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Nautikos
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February 6, 2009
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posted by
Samantha39
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February 6, 2009
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Fantastic!
The words the verse in harmony and creating a sense--for me-- of the unknown, but also a sense of the "new". Indeed you write well. I write the ridiculous, the strange and the weird. You write the magic, the dreams, and the intangible and therefore touch us deeply. Fantastic Shelley, keep at it. More please.
posted by
Hackthorne19
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February 6, 2009
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Fantastic stuff, Shelly!
posted by
_teddypoet_
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February 6, 2009
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How I know how you feel!
Is he gone for long? And I will keep this poem close by, for when my Son, or most likely my Mann, go on a trip like this.
posted by
auslander
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February 6, 2009
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I love you, as well, sammie. Anytime, babe. You are a very special
friend. xxxxooo Best of luck to your brave sea faring son, Mik. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful poetry. xxxxoooo
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hazel_st_cricket
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February 6, 2009
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