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daym! this one is powerful. dramatic enough to be a monologue, in my opinion. beautifully crafted!
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Luz_Briar
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February 4, 2009
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What a way with words
......I'm always amazed. No man around, but hey, sounds like she had no choice. Powerful poem and very sad.
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yellowrose55
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February 4, 2009
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Great work again!
The power of your recent poetry is phenominal
posted by
lionreign
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February 3, 2009
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Wow! This is powerful.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
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February 3, 2009
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posted by
9STAR
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February 3, 2009
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Wow Shelly!
Such powerful imagery here; excellent piece; many blessings and thanks always
posted by
mariaki
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February 3, 2009
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sam
So it goes love. BCA, Bill*s Ca e
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BC-A
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February 2, 2009
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To ignore fate and rise above the temptations it presents can be a momentous decision and cathartic in nature. Then regard fate a the bastarard child of hunger NB gallery slave.
posted by
merkie
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February 2, 2009
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Power-packed this. Take care, Sam. Love you for this!
posted by
hardilaziz
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February 2, 2009
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Awesome!
posted by
BetsyLewis
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February 2, 2009
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Shelly
An amazing poem, a
tour de force that succeeds beautifully! And for some reason, which is slightly, though not entirely, mysterious to me, but one which would be far too lengthy to explore here, it reminds me of Petronius'
Satyricon, of which, incidentally, a marvellous movie was made years ago. But you should read the book first...
posted by
Nautikos
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February 2, 2009
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Wow, that was something! It made me realize that I had always regarded Fate as being female with all the attributes of feminity. It's quite interesting because Fate can be either Destin (male) or Destinée (FEMALE) in French and for some unknown reason to me I associate it with Destinée. So, it was a chock to realize that Fate can be a bastard at time! But then again, a female can also be a bastard....
posted by
auslander
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February 2, 2009
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FANTASTIC !! WOW !
Bastard is right ! lol
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
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February 2, 2009
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you tell him
posted by
lustorlove
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February 2, 2009
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Wow...the power and emotion
like being slapped in the face, I loved it!!!
posted by
MiaElla
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February 2, 2009
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I am speachless... such an amazing poem! Bravo! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
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February 2, 2009
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Wonderful.
Oh, to be able to "erase the slate--"
posted by
scotcanada
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February 2, 2009
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