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But the bulb was shot it seems!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on February 1, 2009 at 10:57 PM | link to this | reply

My arms extend to reach toward the light.

posted by Kabu on February 1, 2009 at 8:25 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Star5_ on February 1, 2009 at 4:05 PM | link to this | reply

a line for the poem
lifting toward the sky with great delight

posted by Wigopa_ on February 1, 2009 at 3:44 PM | link to this | reply

Wondering when we shall meet! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on February 1, 2009 at 2:41 PM | link to this | reply

ADDITION TO POEM
Inching forth without a net, towards its shelter sweet.

posted by brua on February 1, 2009 at 1:16 PM | link to this | reply

Re:
 I LOVE that your thoughts are constipated! Hee! Hee!

posted by BetsyLewis on February 1, 2009 at 11:33 AM | link to this | reply

I think I'm going to wait until there is a little more to it.  I've been reading and commenting for too long and my eyelids are getting heavy and my thoughts constipated.  LOL

posted by TAPS. on February 1, 2009 at 11:22 AM | link to this | reply