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posted by Nautikos on February 1, 2009 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

Amen, sam

posted by Samantha39 on February 1, 2009 at 8:15 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice, sam.

posted by metalrat on February 1, 2009 at 8:00 PM | link to this | reply


posted by troubledwriter on February 1, 2009 at 4:21 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful - depicts Jerusalem as Holy City for all people.  Mal

posted by gapcohen on February 1, 2009 at 2:52 PM | link to this | reply

very descriptive

posted by lustorlove on February 1, 2009 at 11:59 AM | link to this | reply

As always Sam outstanding. Very descriptive and lovely. "dwelling not far from here" makes you feel that no matter what that dwelling will be there and you will never be alone. Well done. 

By the way, check out Urbis... a website for writers as well. Very strict on reviews but the work of others is really interesting and different. 

posted by dpaulinomorris24 on February 1, 2009 at 11:34 AM | link to this | reply

You have beautiful poetry. I don't know how you can be so productive. I struggle for days on a poem. BTW - your daughter is lovely.

posted by BetsyLewis on February 1, 2009 at 11:20 AM | link to this | reply

I love the promise
of a dwelling not far from here - lovely reminder, thanks.

posted by malcolm on February 1, 2009 at 11:07 AM | link to this | reply

Absolutely wonderful !

posted by hazel_st_cricket on February 1, 2009 at 11:00 AM | link to this | reply

Dream transformed into reality! If such a dwelling is available why settle for less? Kudos.

posted by hardilaziz on February 1, 2009 at 10:33 AM | link to this | reply

Great poem Sam. Inspirational, thank you.

posted by Rockingrector_retd on February 1, 2009 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

It needs a heavenly choir singing it to the strains of a grand symphony.

posted by TAPS. on February 1, 2009 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply

A different kind of dwelling to think about!

posted by Straightforward on February 1, 2009 at 8:53 AM | link to this | reply

Majestic! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on February 1, 2009 at 8:43 AM | link to this | reply

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