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I like this. I like the imagery.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 1, 2009 at 6:19 PM
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...romantically evocative...moon 
posted by
Shaman_Moon
on January 31, 2009 at 12:57 PM
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Re: Smooth as silk
Thank you, , for your appreciation!
posted by
cpklapper
on January 31, 2009 at 12:20 AM
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Re: cpklapper
Thank you, Troosha, it most certainly is. I mean, the romance on which this is based.
posted by
cpklapper
on January 31, 2009 at 12:19 AM
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I like the cadence of this poem. No rough edges here. Smooth as silk!
posted by
hardilaziz
on January 30, 2009 at 9:56 PM
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Re: slow dancing through our lives...how lovely...great poem
Thank you, hazel. I wrote it on the train last night and think the lady sitting next to me sneaked a peek, giving me a smile as she got up for her stop. She missed the last two lines, though.
posted by
cpklapper
on January 30, 2009 at 9:01 AM
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cpklapper
It's a slow but wonderful dance.....
posted by
Troosha
on January 30, 2009 at 7:04 AM
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slow dancing through our lives...how lovely...great poem
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on January 30, 2009 at 5:51 AM
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