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I like this. I like the imagery.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 1, 2009 at 6:19 PM | link to this | reply

...romantically evocative...moon

posted by Shaman_Moon on January 31, 2009 at 12:57 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Smooth as silk

Thank you, hardilaziz, for your appreciation!

posted by cpklapper on January 31, 2009 at 12:20 AM | link to this | reply

Re: cpklapper

Thank you, Troosha, it most certainly is.  I mean, the romance on which this is based.

posted by cpklapper on January 31, 2009 at 12:19 AM | link to this | reply

I like the cadence of this poem. No rough edges here. Smooth as silk!

posted by hardilaziz on January 30, 2009 at 9:56 PM | link to this | reply

Re: slow dancing through our lives...how lovely...great poem

Thank you, hazel.  I wrote it on the train last night and think the lady sitting next to me sneaked a peek, giving me a smile as she got up for her stop.  She missed the last two lines, though.

posted by cpklapper on January 30, 2009 at 9:01 AM | link to this | reply

cpklapper

It's a slow but wonderful dance.....

posted by Troosha on January 30, 2009 at 7:04 AM | link to this | reply

slow dancing through our lives...how lovely...great poem

posted by hazel_st_cricket on January 30, 2009 at 5:51 AM | link to this | reply