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Re: TAPS

I do appreciate your reading and your comments. They are encouraging to me.

posted by Justi on February 1, 2009 at 4:43 PM | link to this | reply

I'm still keeping up.  I read this the day you posted it and then got sidetracked when I was about to comment.  That happens to me, LOL.

posted by TAPS. on February 1, 2009 at 3:45 PM | link to this | reply

NatureSpirit23

Hi sweetie, thank you so much. I am still having trouble with person. I think I have to go back to 1st person. In that it almost writes itself. Hope you have a wonderful weekend. ILU

posted by Justi on January 30, 2009 at 11:25 PM | link to this | reply

Like everyone else. . .

I can't wait to read what happens next, especially in the showdown between Jess and her mother.  Excellent family conflict there.

posted by NatureSpirit23 on January 30, 2009 at 9:27 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu

Sometimes I wonder if they are not supposed to be but it is really difficult. Pain between a mother and children is so so hard. You know what I am talking about but it is from the different side.

posted by Justi on January 30, 2009 at 9:02 PM | link to this | reply

Wiley John

No I don't they don't show up on my desk top, just on the laptop. I didn't know everybody was getting that. Thanks for telling me.

posted by Justi on January 30, 2009 at 9:00 PM | link to this | reply

Nautikos

I appreciate your comment. That is what I want it to do. I have not edited, just a proof read.

posted by Justi on January 30, 2009 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

how difficult family realtionships can be and you have conveyed them so

well here between the mother and the daughter. I heard myself mumbling "old Bat'" LOL.

posted by Kabu on January 30, 2009 at 8:30 PM | link to this | reply

Justi

Well done, you sure do convey the emotions well too. Do you know what these are caused by in your post luv?   <!--[if !supportEmptyParas]--> <!--[endif]--> It makes the post difficult to read and maybe somebody can provide an answer for you. Love to you both.

posted by WileyJohn on January 30, 2009 at 8:20 PM | link to this | reply

Justi

Very well done! I actually felt the emotional tension during that encounter between mother and daughter...

posted by Nautikos on January 30, 2009 at 5:11 PM | link to this | reply

Re: lustorlove

Thank you for the read. I am glad you enjoyed it.

posted by Justi on January 30, 2009 at 2:34 PM | link to this | reply

I hadnt seen this before but its good

posted by lustorlove on January 30, 2009 at 10:00 AM | link to this | reply

Sam444

Thank you so much.

posted by Justi on January 30, 2009 at 7:01 AM | link to this | reply

This is so good!! I am captivated! sam

posted by sam444 on January 30, 2009 at 6:51 AM | link to this | reply