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You map the peaks and troughs of your life with sincerity and elegance. Wonderful.

posted by hardilaziz on January 30, 2009 at 8:51 AM | link to this | reply

I've read this three times. Powerful.....heartfelt. The line that really catches my attention, "I have climbed mountains through my premeditated fear".

posted by yellowrose55 on January 29, 2009 at 9:01 PM | link to this | reply

Came back again, as I tried to remember and couldn't last night. I was just trying to find this sequence when I saw your explanations. It requires mastery, and the rendition is masterly, Sis Sam. Admirations oand from your bro.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on January 29, 2009 at 6:55 PM | link to this | reply

AMAZING WORK

posted by Itza on January 29, 2009 at 4:38 PM | link to this | reply

I am going to have to try some more of your poem forms, they are a chellenge

posted by lustorlove on January 29, 2009 at 3:43 PM | link to this | reply

Climbing higher on the path! Unfinished we are.Well done pantoum Sam

posted by merkie on January 29, 2009 at 11:18 AM | link to this | reply

path unfinished....love those words... xxooo

posted by hazel_st_cricket on January 29, 2009 at 7:34 AM | link to this | reply

Me says what snowview says Sis, except that I comment . From my still cool desert sands bro

posted by Bhaskar.ing on January 29, 2009 at 7:19 AM | link to this | reply

Though I read your poems, I seldom leave a comment, simply because I have no words to describe how powerful and beautiful they are. You're so creative, and have such a way with words....many thanks and blessings for sharing. Have a great day! Nita.

posted by snowview on January 29, 2009 at 6:58 AM | link to this | reply

Great stuff, Shelly!

posted by _teddypoet_ on January 29, 2009 at 6:33 AM | link to this | reply

Ahh the call of the trail in the mountain. To go or not to go, that's the question.

posted by auslander on January 29, 2009 at 5:46 AM | link to this | reply

Nice piece of work Shelly

refreshing and inspiring; superb; many blessings and thanks always

posted by mariaki on January 29, 2009 at 5:14 AM | link to this | reply

Crafted exceptionally well... Has a  'Robert Frost' feel ... not overdone!

posted by gypsypoet1975 on January 29, 2009 at 4:05 AM | link to this | reply