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posted by 9STAR on January 28, 2009 at 9:20 PM | link to this | reply

Gazing at the universe on a cloudless night can make a person thoughts take flight.

posted by TAPS. on January 28, 2009 at 7:31 PM | link to this | reply

"Seek rest for my final days" and "sea of tranquility"......"Gazing the universe".Through out this whole poem there is peace, readiness, and so much beauty.

posted by yellowrose55 on January 28, 2009 at 7:11 PM | link to this | reply

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posted by strat on January 28, 2009 at 6:42 PM | link to this | reply

Most enthralling gaze you share sam. Ever seeking the tranquil sea a fine destination to seek! 

posted by merkie on January 28, 2009 at 12:53 PM | link to this | reply

Sam

Ahhh…. That constant pursuit – to realize our course, embrace the journey, and seek tranquility.  

posted by Troosha on January 28, 2009 at 10:28 AM | link to this | reply

another work of genius

I love the themes in this... it's beautiful, and you imagery is, as ever, applied with surgical skill and poetic chaos. 

posted by lionreign on January 28, 2009 at 9:49 AM | link to this | reply

Shelly..WOW..this poem is so gripping and it amazes me at the

outstanding talent you have ! WOW !!!! xxxooo...luv ya..xxooo

posted by hazel_st_cricket on January 28, 2009 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply

I know my place is not here, cloaked in barren soil, amid my own futility.
And I am etched upon the earth’s reality; in October, a farmer’s trampled cornfield maze.

Such a powerful statement about our tenuous grip on this earth.  Lovely!  Mal

posted by gapcohen on January 28, 2009 at 7:48 AM | link to this | reply

Celestial, MEDEAR! I'm in high heaven just reading it!

posted by auslander on January 28, 2009 at 7:48 AM | link to this | reply

Your poetry always amazes me!

posted by VictoriaP on January 28, 2009 at 7:27 AM | link to this | reply

Shelly

Great poem! Only you could see tranquility behind that mysterious, churning and rapidly expanding maelstrom that is the Universe... 

posted by Nautikos on January 28, 2009 at 7:23 AM | link to this | reply

Once again, wrapping that form around your little finger! Rich vocabulary!

posted by gypsypoet1975 on January 28, 2009 at 6:52 AM | link to this | reply

  super I mean this with every thing you are a super

posted by lestate7 on January 28, 2009 at 6:00 AM | link to this | reply