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I like your style
It seems clear and yet rich with images and feelings
posted by
lionreign
on January 29, 2009 at 2:37 AM
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I really like this one! Good visuals. I like the tug-of-war of trying to be sane, be in love, yet be real... and the hopeless/hope aspect! Cool!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 28, 2009 at 4:49 AM
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Re: Unresolved feelings?
Ha--yeah just a couple... Thanks for the feedback. I am still trying to get a feel for which poems are good/bad. I look forward to hearing more comments...
posted by
NewMentality
on January 27, 2009 at 6:59 PM
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Unresolved feelings?
Well written. Clear.
posted by
scotcanada
on January 27, 2009 at 6:48 PM
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