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Beautiful...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on January 27, 2009 at 2:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re: WOW!!!!!!!!
Thank you, mariaki! I appreciate such wonderful thoughts and feedback! God bless!

posted by LadyGhost1970 on January 26, 2009 at 5:00 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Beautifully written
Thank you, lionreign! I appreciate the feedback, and I'm glad the message came through! I wasn't certain I'd voiced it well, lol...

posted by LadyGhost1970 on January 26, 2009 at 4:59 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Soul Builder -
Thank you so much! Even in our darkest hours, if we can find a way to fight back and rise to the top again, then the day is not a total loss... As long as we learn something from the experience, then it's worth it, I think...

posted by LadyGhost1970 on January 26, 2009 at 4:57 PM | link to this | reply

Re: What great imagery and flow
Thank you, calia! Honestly, the intensity came from an intense day... Sometimes we slip and slide, but if we can make our way back out, then it's a victory!

posted by LadyGhost1970 on January 26, 2009 at 4:54 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you, merkie! I appreciate your support and input!

posted by LadyGhost1970 on January 26, 2009 at 4:50 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Reinforced, now by steel!
Thank you so much! I appreciate your comments and interest!!

posted by LadyGhost1970 on January 26, 2009 at 4:49 PM | link to this | reply

WOW!!!!!!!!
a stunning write my friend; a truly excellent piece; very well done indeed; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on January 26, 2009 at 5:28 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully written
I love the use of short lines - it gives a feeling of immediacy and the message is so uplifting.  Great poem, thank you for sharing it!

posted by lionreign on January 26, 2009 at 3:28 AM | link to this | reply

eautiful expression of your capacity to fight back!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on January 26, 2009 at 1:27 AM | link to this | reply

What great imagery and flow
Some of it was unexpectedly shocking, but that only increased the intensity of the poem!

posted by calia14 on January 26, 2009 at 12:07 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful recovery from the vivid emotional slide into the pit of depression! Stirring write!

posted by merkie on January 25, 2009 at 11:50 AM | link to this | reply

Reinforced, now by steel!
 Great imagery!  I love it.Balloon Heart

posted by Kolekshuns on January 25, 2009 at 10:23 AM | link to this | reply