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I'll add his safety to my prayer list.
A mother always worries. And prays.
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scotcanada
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January 25, 2009
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How did I miss this one?
It is so heartfelt and touching...I love it so much, sweety. I feel for you with your son leaving.....xxxoo
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hazel_st_cricket
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January 24, 2009
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your poem is heart felt and it touches the depths of my soul.
posted by
muley12
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January 24, 2009
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Keep playing the flute, Sam.
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hardilaziz
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January 24, 2009
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Your other commenters have said it all!
You write beautifully and every word is so heartfelt and scenic... I really am amazed and in awe of your talent daily! I will keep you and your son in my prayers so he may return safely!
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LadyGhost1970
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January 24, 2009
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Sam, You write so beautifully. Its like floating through a magical place to read your poetry. I wish your son a safe journey. I watch the show Deadliest Catch often that Naut refers to.. I can imagine after watching that that you worry about your sons off shore work. He will have many memories of that life for sure. Peace dear friend , Peace ~OTA
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OTA.
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January 24, 2009
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Your poem gives you a great literary view of the landscape love. And, the symbolism in the analogy shows love for a sailor in it. Moreover we’re pretty much certain sure that you write here about your son.
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BC-A
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January 24, 2009
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Very good! Harpo47
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Harpo47
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January 24, 2009
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So very very lyrical and hearfelt. May your son return safely.
posted by
vogue
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January 24, 2009
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sam ~.~
A beautiful piece. I pray your son's safe and speedy return and for your peace of mind. Thank you for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
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January 24, 2009
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hey super
i see you
posted by
lestate7
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January 24, 2009
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Very nice, Shelly...
posted by
_teddypoet_
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January 24, 2009
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Hallo Sam, what a beautifully lyrical poem; I enjoyed reading it. Bon voyage to your son! Thank you for visiting my blog. One of my friends has his birthday on the 11th September too; so nowadays I never need to write myself a reminder about his birthday. Have a wonderful weekend!
posted by
elinjo
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January 24, 2009
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how sad
posted by
lustorlove
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January 23, 2009
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May your son have a blessed time at sea. May Mom keep her love fluted in tune with him while he is away.
posted by
merkie
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January 23, 2009
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Your poem is soothing and comforting..."Near The Reeds", and the title, Striking. I wish your son a safe, warm and successful journey out at sea.
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yellowrose55
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January 23, 2009
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coooooool.......
posted by
9STAR
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January 23, 2009
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Great Poem
Hope your son has a fantastic trip.
posted by
Kolekshuns
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January 23, 2009
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A love poems but I don't know how to write it.
Happy sea voyage to your son!
posted by
kwentuhero
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January 23, 2009
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Shelly
A wonderful poem! And my very best wishes for your son! I wish him the fairest weather possible for this time of year, and a successful and above all safe voyage...
And, just as a matter of interest: have you ever watched 'The Deadliest Catch' on the Discovery Channel? It's real-life footage about the crab fishery in the Bering Sea, and it's one of the very few shows I hate to miss...
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Nautikos
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January 23, 2009
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