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Master Piece for you shine life through combat concept as of a master to
bluid strong fonudation, for life is a battle and strom living is love.
posted by
Mystereo
on February 25, 2009 at 2:33 PM
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This is an interesting take, Zuraffo. I can see that love also poses a
challenge to meet higher standards than one can see oneself reaching...
posted by
Straightforward
on January 22, 2009 at 11:59 PM
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Thanks for the words of appreciation guys
Really appreciate it.
posted by
zuraffo
on January 22, 2009 at 11:41 PM
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Know this:
I will rather you live in my heart,
Then to die to others,
In vain.
At first impression this poem’s awesome. As you read into it it’s beautiful as well. BCA, Bill*s Ca
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posted by
BC-A
on January 22, 2009 at 8:38 PM
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Excellent write! It sends an image of the described author's note. True love in life's lessons is most essential to become the one we are meant to be.
No is a loving answer from a parent or teacher to protect the child.
posted by
merkie
on January 22, 2009 at 10:43 AM
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zuraffo
I think the poem explores the dynamics of most relationships – be it master/student or even lover to lover – very powerfully. We have something to learn from just about anyone….
posted by
Troosha
on January 22, 2009 at 9:04 AM
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Zuraffo, I actually did get from the poem what you were intending... 'the teacher/lesson' stanza was helpful. There definitely is a back-and-forth pull between being the best, as well as being overcome. Thanks for your philosophy!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
on January 22, 2009 at 6:56 AM
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