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I know when I have had enough of every day
For then my thoughts cry out to play
A dreamy look comes over me
As my soul roams far and free

As new day rises in winter’s sky
it captures heart and entices eyes
and into begging sun we lean
to follow heart and dream to dream

Beautiful moments in life comes and goes fast
Just make that as a memorable one…

For when I am done
All will hail to me
This is what I see
Light winning over darkness
Never casting shadows again
on our awareness

At last I see that I am free
Dreams are mine to carry me
Away into another flight
I whisper my secrets of delight.
Alone I think of thee.

Beautiful one ..as you fly on a wing

Thoughts  dancing a merry swing

Your heart offered new  freedom

A voice to sing in the calm

The lifetime melody now I belong!

posted by merkie on January 28, 2009 at 9:40 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks.

posted by BetsyLewis on January 22, 2009 at 4:09 PM | link to this | reply

This is a very thoughtful post.

posted by EX_TURPI on January 22, 2009 at 3:48 PM | link to this | reply