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Your poem "satiates my thirsty desert". Honestly.


posted by
hardilaziz
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January 21, 2009
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Dusty side-trails reveal His awesome power & beauty...
that the highways blindly cut through...it is there for the taking for those who venture...well-said my wise friend!
posted by
ash_pradhan
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January 21, 2009
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very awesome !!!!
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
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January 21, 2009
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Amazing where we sometimes find true perspective my dear friend.......
and here we have an amazing poem; many blessings and thanks always
posted by
mariaki
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January 21, 2009
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A little bit of 'road less travelled' in there!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
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January 21, 2009
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Who is the queen of imagery now? Kudos my friend. Wonderfully done!!!! xoxoxoxo

posted by
Sinome
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January 20, 2009
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Wonderful imagery!
And so true it is, that dusty hearts are revived when they cross paths with another dusty heart on a dusty trail such as you describe! Terrific write!!

posted by
LadyGhost1970
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January 20, 2009
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posted by
Samantha39
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January 20, 2009
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We learn from people along the way love.
posted by
BC-A
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January 20, 2009
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Sounds like an adventure found on a "Dusty Trail" has quenched that inner thirst. Brilliant.....the "trail" would have some bumps but the challenges bring great reward to the "heart".



posted by
yellowrose55
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January 20, 2009
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sometimes it does us good to get off life's busy highways and take a dusty
trail, a road less travelled...one never knows who or what might lie ahead..



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posted by
Rumor
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January 20, 2009
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whats up super
finally home! great poem
posted by
lestate7
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January 20, 2009
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posted by
Itza
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January 20, 2009
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Believe me you could find a dust trail here
posted by
lustorlove
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January 20, 2009
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Great!
A truly eye opening perspective.
posted by
porcelaingoddess1
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January 20, 2009
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great imagery.
you also made me crave a long cool one. lol
posted by
muley12
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January 20, 2009
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Shelly
Great poem! Dusty trails are so much more interesting and enjoyable than the highway...


posted by
Nautikos
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January 20, 2009
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