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I agress with Teddy. Stunning work!

posted by merkie on January 21, 2009 at 10:35 AM | link to this | reply

Stunning work, my friend!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on January 20, 2009 at 11:12 PM | link to this | reply

Nice poem. Carless youth. They're everywhere!

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 20, 2009 at 8:04 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Have you been reading my autobiography?
lol

posted by calia14 on January 20, 2009 at 6:55 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Itza on January 20, 2009 at 5:45 PM | link to this | reply

Have you been reading my autobiography?

posted by metalrat on January 20, 2009 at 8:06 AM | link to this | reply

Memories not too faded my dear!
very nicely done; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on January 20, 2009 at 5:23 AM | link to this | reply

Oh careless youth! Only faint memories remain now, calia

posted by Bhaskar.ing on January 19, 2009 at 9:21 PM | link to this | reply

Re: wigopa
Thanks!

posted by calia14 on January 19, 2009 at 9:08 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Uh oh
lol, the best thing my mom ever said to me was "I trust your judgement."  It always made me think twice before doing something stupid.

posted by calia14 on January 19, 2009 at 9:07 PM | link to this | reply

Sweet sixteen...the turning point in a lot of women's young lives..very well captured!

posted by Wigopa_ on January 19, 2009 at 8:59 PM | link to this | reply

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It was right off the exit, and there was like an office building and my landlord owned it - we lived in his apartment across the street - we were only there for about a year.

posted by phantomqueen on January 19, 2009 at 8:53 PM | link to this | reply

Uh oh

my oldest son will be 16 this year!!!

LOL

posted by phantomqueen on January 19, 2009 at 8:50 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sinome
Thanks! 

posted by calia14 on January 19, 2009 at 8:34 PM | link to this | reply

Poignant and as scary as being 16 ( or trying to raise someone that is 16):-) Very well written Calia 

posted by Sinome on January 19, 2009 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply