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-=RenSpur=-

posted by RenSpur on January 19, 2009 at 9:31 PM | link to this | reply

A very honest and real description
of falling in love.  This leaves me wanting to know what happens next, which is litmus test for good story writing.



Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on January 19, 2009 at 1:39 PM | link to this | reply