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great poem

Very well written. Haunting.  I just joined the site tonight...  I look forward to reading more of your poems.

posted by NewMentality on January 27, 2009 at 7:42 PM | link to this | reply

A clever expression

A moment in time.  An exciting journey for tomorrow.  Very motivating!  Also, I want to say thank you for all your inspiring comments! 

posted by porcelaingoddess1 on January 20, 2009 at 5:33 PM | link to this | reply

Much better to have a blazing row than to suffer silence!

posted by elinjo on January 20, 2009 at 4:54 AM | link to this | reply

Any indifference is bad enough Shelly

but add silence and you have the beginnings of an end to anything; superb piece my friend; many blessings and thanks always

posted by mariaki on January 20, 2009 at 3:13 AM | link to this | reply

beautifully written

silent indifference is (I feel) the worst end for a relationship, great expression on that

posted by lionreign on January 20, 2009 at 3:03 AM | link to this | reply

A gorgeous array of words

and thank you for comments, to me as well!!!

posted by phantomqueen on January 19, 2009 at 9:19 PM | link to this | reply

For the entrance is but an exit; the silence will become audible
and the only noise will be the closing of the door.
Your silence deafens my existence paralyzing my tomorrow.
For it is not I hiding behind silent indifference. Excellent closure. This says it all as the closing door.

posted by merkie on January 19, 2009 at 8:16 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent! Very good meter too.

-=RenSpur=-

posted by RenSpur on January 19, 2009 at 8:04 PM | link to this | reply

You offer some valuable insights here. This is the icing on the cake you offered yesterday!

posted by hardilaziz on January 19, 2009 at 7:30 PM | link to this | reply

What a din

silence can make in our minds and our hearts.    

posted by calia14 on January 19, 2009 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Wow, sam...

What an observation, metalrat!

posted by calia14 on January 19, 2009 at 7:16 PM | link to this | reply

Wow, sam...

..very intense!
The biggest insult we can give someone is indifference, for, it's indifference...not hate, that is the opposite of love.

posted by metalrat on January 19, 2009 at 6:20 PM | link to this | reply

Wasn't too concerned about the poem. What I liked most was how you lashed language to my tongue. If the intent of the poem was to convey a thought, then it could have been much shorter (compact). On the other hand, if it is a sound poem, and to overlook the content--quite interesting.

posted by jfm32 on January 19, 2009 at 6:11 PM | link to this | reply

Silent indifference........

....I'm not sure if it's good or not.  Guess it depends on the situation.

posted by Kolekshuns on January 19, 2009 at 5:26 PM | link to this | reply

That's a good one. A bit heavy for my frivolous taste (as you well know! LOL), but I read it to the end and I like it, MEDEAR!

posted by auslander on January 19, 2009 at 2:25 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent.

posted by BetsyLewis on January 19, 2009 at 2:22 PM | link to this | reply

Yes the entrance is but an exit, so the exit but an entrance. Great work.

posted by EX_TURPI on January 19, 2009 at 1:46 PM | link to this | reply

Sam

Better is should deafen than hide behind silent indifference. 

posted by Troosha on January 19, 2009 at 12:32 PM | link to this | reply

Silence can change everything, or if frozen..watch out. Love this one,kind of sad though.

posted by yellowrose55 on January 19, 2009 at 11:39 AM | link to this | reply

yes I agree deep! love this.

posted by fairygoddess on January 19, 2009 at 11:16 AM | link to this | reply

WOW! Very heavy!

What destruction lies in indifference! Potent!

posted by gypsypoet1975 on January 19, 2009 at 10:34 AM | link to this | reply