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Marvelous, clarity reinstates sanity! - Ash
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ash_pradhan
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January 19, 2009
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posted by
9STAR
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January 19, 2009
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You show us how to listen to ourselves in quiet moments and wider thoughts in deep poems like yours love. BCA, Bill*s Ca
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BC-A
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January 19, 2009
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i love that very last line!
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MiaElla
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January 19, 2009
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Marvellous. Shows that you are very close to your goal-SALVATION!
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hardilaziz
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January 19, 2009
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Sam
I felt your heart and soul in this piece. Beautiful......
posted by
Troosha
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January 19, 2009
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Shelly my dear
How I could do with some of these moments at this time....... with all thats going on in my world right now I feel I am going to explode if I don't get some me time soon!!!! Many blessings my friend always
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mariaki
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January 19, 2009
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You have beautifully touched on those quiet moments...when deep "revelation" comes.
posted by
yellowrose55
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January 19, 2009
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I have heard that voice...well done, Shelly!
posted by
_teddypoet_
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January 18, 2009
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Nice!
I can tell it's an inspired piece.
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zuraffo
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January 18, 2009
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What a fantastic, superb, phenomenal composition!!! Give me some of your poetic wisdom dear sis Shelly... your lil bro will be greatly obliged. Well, I'm Ok, that's what I like to always consider, hope it does not deteriorate further.
from desert prince .... we've had hailstorms recently and the streets are slippery adding woe to my vision.
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Bhaskar.ing
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January 18, 2009
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Sam444
Beautifully said and good night to you luv
posted by
WileyJohn
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January 18, 2009
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Shelly
Superbly done!
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Nautikos
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January 18, 2009
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I can see the stars in the back drop of the sky
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lustorlove
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January 18, 2009
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I love the silence and peacefulness of the night.
posted by
TAPS.
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January 18, 2009
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I don't know how you do it, but you do!
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Texas_Gem
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January 18, 2009
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you are such a talent, my friend. xxoo
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hazel_st_cricket
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January 18, 2009
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The still quiet voice is an echo 'till we learn the listening skills to hear. Is the dark illuminated ? The light is ever present. Each has their personal experience.Keeps me thinking Shelly Thanks . A meditative feel to your write. Excellent!
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merkie
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January 18, 2009
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Sammy - a great poem about clarity. I especially like;
unity is silently spoken
then it is heard and
collectively understood then
prudently accepted.
Would that would happen to the East of us!! Mal
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gapcohen
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January 18, 2009
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A quiet metamorphosis ...
I also like the last 2 lines. I can't remember where it was, but somewhere in the bible, I think it says that God rejoices over us...Singing! the last part of your poem reminds me of that!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
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January 18, 2009
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Hmmm...
...let me chew on this one a while, Shelly.
The ending intrigues me, but, I like it!
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metalrat
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January 18, 2009
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