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I loved it!!!

posted by Ariala on January 18, 2009 at 7:39 AM | link to this | reply

I loved the choice of words in the poem.

posted by hardilaziz on January 18, 2009 at 4:01 AM | link to this | reply

Hurray for the green and white and orange!

-=RenSpur=-

posted by RenSpur on January 18, 2009 at 2:59 AM | link to this | reply

Nice way to Celebrate Langston Hughes. "Did you Ever go down to the river?" And I love the way you end it....with a new adventure in mind.

posted by yellowrose55 on January 17, 2009 at 9:13 PM | link to this | reply

A star once more

  

posted by skye08 on January 17, 2009 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

Sam444

You could take a photo of a corn cob pipe and make a wonderful poem, not just an excellent poet! You are an excellent poet.

posted by Justi on January 17, 2009 at 7:43 PM | link to this | reply

I am always amazed by how creative you are!

you just churn out one masterpiece, after another

posted by muley12 on January 17, 2009 at 5:48 PM | link to this | reply

Excellently crafted, sam...

...into a lovely, evocative poem.

posted by metalrat on January 17, 2009 at 4:40 PM | link to this | reply

I have a feeling Langston Hughes would like it.

posted by TAPS. on January 17, 2009 at 4:16 PM | link to this | reply

Shelly

What an interesting way of writing poetry, and this one is a gem. I don't know L.H.'s work, but you make me curious, and I shall certainly take a look at it...

posted by Nautikos on January 17, 2009 at 12:21 PM | link to this | reply

Hello Shelly This is an absolute gem filled with so many faets of thoughts and images. What a neat idea!Kudsos.Keeping you in mind I hope you feel better!

posted by merkie on January 17, 2009 at 10:59 AM | link to this | reply

So many images come to mind while reading it. I'm glad to see you're well enough to write some poem today.

posted by auslander on January 17, 2009 at 10:53 AM | link to this | reply

I love it.....xxoo

posted by hazel_st_cricket on January 17, 2009 at 10:21 AM | link to this | reply

I like it

posted by lustorlove on January 17, 2009 at 10:12 AM | link to this | reply

You set the stage and wrapped it up with a brilliant ending!Very good!

posted by gypsypoet1975 on January 17, 2009 at 9:47 AM | link to this | reply