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Just think how much more space there would be for living if we didn't have to use those cemetaries! I'm going to go have to check out Ciel's post now... I probably should have read hers first!

posted by gypsypoet1975 on January 20, 2009 at 3:49 AM | link to this | reply

Very moving Taps...so passionate you paint a picture, emotional.... on bended knee.

posted by yellowrose55 on January 19, 2009 at 4:38 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful work, my friend!

posted by _teddypoet_ on January 19, 2009 at 12:21 AM | link to this | reply

Awsome and clever read disguise, you ask ? But talking about death. Great!

Can I share a post Seeds 3rd poem 3rd page i'll continue to read thank you.

posted by Mystereo on January 18, 2009 at 11:45 AM | link to this | reply

Poignant! Taps you write outstanding poetry! sam

posted by sam444 on January 16, 2009 at 12:55 PM | link to this | reply

TAPS

What a poem...It immediately brought to mind Munch's The Scream...

posted by Nautikos on January 16, 2009 at 4:35 AM | link to this | reply

Emotion and imagery superbly done!

that little word can cause such heartache and no anwer forthcoming; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on January 16, 2009 at 2:36 AM | link to this | reply

very eleoquently moving, TAPS--

Thanks for this brilliant response to the prompt!

posted by Ciel on January 15, 2009 at 5:34 PM | link to this | reply

Xcellent as always!

Very touching poem! Keep on writing!!

posted by Texas_Gem on January 15, 2009 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply

Sadness resonates in dark black tonesseeping into the screamining question WHY? Excellent write very moving.

posted by merkie on January 15, 2009 at 4:39 PM | link to this | reply