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Familiar territory.  I'll be posting a few of those.  Maybe you'd like to read them and share your comments.  I'd really appreciate it.

posted by porcelaingoddess1 on January 17, 2009 at 11:01 PM | link to this | reply

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I am just having trouble keeping my voice. My divorce is still pending. I have fallen in love and had my heart broken. Friendships have been redefined... and well some have died. Inspiration is just hard to come by. Thanks for missing me.

posted by flappergirl on January 17, 2009 at 6:42 PM | link to this | reply

oooops now "whould" but "should"

posted by Sinome on January 17, 2009 at 5:41 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderfully thought out... and very effectively written.  I had not seen you around in a while...was it my fault or were you taking a breezer from us?  Anyway I missed this poetry so I whould be back calling :-)  Great job!

posted by Sinome on January 17, 2009 at 5:40 PM | link to this | reply

Emphatic repetition is most effective rhyme scheme to make an imperative statement Cool write!

posted by merkie on January 13, 2009 at 4:16 PM | link to this | reply

This is nice...and much emotion.  Well done.

posted by RASSE on January 13, 2009 at 8:23 AM | link to this | reply