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I liked your poetry,and look forward to being apart of

this site, Hi how are you?

posted by juju3 on January 13, 2009 at 4:03 AM | link to this | reply

such a great ending!as always - magnificent. thank you for the read!

posted by rubypoem on January 12, 2009 at 6:40 AM | link to this | reply

Sam,

Good advice!  I suspect I might follow it accidentally.  Ah, the path of humility, if only it were an easy one to tread. 

posted by myrrhage on January 12, 2009 at 6:28 AM | link to this | reply

 This one sweeps me away love.

 

posted by BC-A on January 12, 2009 at 5:05 AM | link to this | reply

Superb piece my dear Shelly

love the flow and rhythm; many blessings and thanks always my friend

posted by mariaki on January 12, 2009 at 4:38 AM | link to this | reply

A very good one Sam! Harpo47

posted by Harpo47 on January 12, 2009 at 3:37 AM | link to this | reply

I like the progression in this

very interesting indeed.  Great poem overall

posted by lionreign on January 12, 2009 at 3:29 AM | link to this | reply

I like this

 Wonderful poem.

posted by Kolekshuns on January 12, 2009 at 2:12 AM | link to this | reply

You obviously know how a storm builds up and subsides within us ordinary mortals. Brilliantly done.

posted by hardilaziz on January 12, 2009 at 1:28 AM | link to this | reply

a storm will clear out the polution and waken hearts

posted by lustorlove on January 11, 2009 at 10:31 PM | link to this | reply

posted by 9STAR on January 11, 2009 at 5:29 PM | link to this | reply

The progress of purpose, may the lessons remain in humility!

posted by merkie on January 11, 2009 at 5:10 PM | link to this | reply

"The little reed, bending to the force of the wind, soon stood upright again when the storm had passed over."   ~Aesop

posted by TAPS. on January 11, 2009 at 3:34 PM | link to this | reply

So true...a lot can be learned from the trials of a(a spiritual humbling can awaken the soul) storm - raging. Your poem is an inspirational beauty.

posted by yellowrose55 on January 11, 2009 at 3:22 PM | link to this | reply

Eloquent advice!

posted by gypsypoet1975 on January 11, 2009 at 3:14 PM | link to this | reply

so very true

when we can still our heart and connect to spirit the storm does cease

posted by skye08 on January 11, 2009 at 3:04 PM | link to this | reply

Sam

When we still ourselves and exercise some humility, all storms subside.  Nicely put!

posted by Troosha on January 11, 2009 at 2:02 PM | link to this | reply

well written verse, my friend..xxoo

i have the whole spirit of poverty down pat.

posted by hazel_st_cricket on January 11, 2009 at 1:25 PM | link to this | reply